Pontakun's
Story
A mysterious creature named “Pontakun”
lived in a calm town.
He can speak only “Fumo” language.
However, He is kind to dear figure, and anyone.
So he is very popular, and be had good impression.
One day, Pontakun was taking a walk in the town.
Then he found a strange crowd.
It was a couple surrounded by three Yakuzas.
The couple seemed to be troubled very much.
Pontakun rushed resolutely.
“Fumofoo!(Stop it!)” He Shouted to the Yakuzas.
Then they got angry.
“Are there any complaint?” Yakuza of Skinhead (Leader) said.
“Torment you!” Yakuza of Regent said.
“Pinch you!” Yakuza of Longhair said.
Then Pontakun said, “Fumo, Fumooo! (Come on!)”
The Yakuzas dashed to strike Pontakun.
But, then, Skinhead was head-butted by Pontakun.
Secondly, Pontakun threw Regent and trampled him down.
Then, Pontakun shot Longhair by the shotgun.
A rubber-coated ball hit him, and he made phlegm bump in forehead.
Yakuzas are received continuous attack and they left with crying.
Because of praiseworthy of Pontakun’s kind activity,
he was commended from a town and became more popular in the town.

…という何だか身も蓋もオリジナリティも無い作品。
勿論、元ネタは言うまでも無くフルメタの「ボン太くん」。
しかも、この話はそのボン太くん初登場話「一途なステイクアウト」のリメイクみたいなもんです。w
リメイクっつーか、名前伏せ。(爆
もともとこの作品にはイラストが付いていましたが、先生への提出に伴い掲載不可です。_| ̄|〇 |||
(一応、計画中のメモ書きを載せておきましたw)
私がイラストを担当し、シナリオ・英訳を友人であるミキティがしてくれました。
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